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Okay, so no one asked for a commentary on Paralysis, but there are some things I have to say, because this story kind of terrified me when I started it, and I am so, so ridiculously pleased with how it turned out that I would like to explain why.
My first concern was that the emotional story I was trying to get across wouldn't work. It did, thankfully, mostly because I let it takes its time and really stretch out to fill the whole fic. Switching to James's POV helped a lot, but created my second problem, my bigger concern.
My bigger concern was the part where James gets back into bed.
( tl;dr, when I was 16 I started work in a Nursing Home. )
So thank you for all your comments. They mean even more than usual, because there were so many things I was worried about, and knowing that I didn't screw up is really, really good.
My first concern was that the emotional story I was trying to get across wouldn't work. It did, thankfully, mostly because I let it takes its time and really stretch out to fill the whole fic. Switching to James's POV helped a lot, but created my second problem, my bigger concern.
My bigger concern was the part where James gets back into bed.
( tl;dr, when I was 16 I started work in a Nursing Home. )
So thank you for all your comments. They mean even more than usual, because there were so many things I was worried about, and knowing that I didn't screw up is really, really good.
